Monday, 27 December 2021

No Good Deed - Flash Fiction Story by Douglas V. Miller

 



No Good Deed

Head down, huffing slightly, Adam shuffles his polished wingtips into the park. He collapses on the first bench he comes to. Thank God! I thought I’d never get out of there. Checking his phone, he finds the battery is dead and sticks it in his pocket. Great, just what I need! At least no one can bother me for awhile. I’ll relish my time while I have it. A meagre sun winks through the clouds. He raises his face and squints towards it. I could stand to absorb a little warmth. It’s a sharpish tang out here. Sitting up, he snaps open the local newspaper and feels a tug on his left pants leg. Startled, he frowns and the paper crackles as it drops to his lap. What the...?

A little brown-haired girl in a frilly dress looks tearfully at him. Her cashmere coat is open, and formal white gloves adorn her hands. She pants as if she’s run hard, and tears stream down her scrunched-up face. Her head jerks back and forth, and she looks around as if she’s afraid. She’s dressed pretty fancy for the park. Where did she come from? What scared her? He scans the area and sees no one. Adam leans down as near her eye-level as he can. “What seems to be the trouble, little miss? Where are your parents? Did someone chase you? Are you hurt?”

With a quick shake of her head, she holds up her arms, silently asking him to pick her up. What should I do? I don’t know how to handle children. He quickly scans the near empty park again for signs of anybody who could assist but comes up empty. Why is she here alone? The tiny girl’s eyes are red, tears continue to flow, and she’s in distress. There’s nothing for it, I suppose. “Come on up here, then.” Just how are you supposed to pick them up, anyway?

With a slight grunt, he lifts her to his lap. In the struggle not to drop her and keep her clothes properly arranged, his newspaper slid underneath the bench, spread out. Lord, she’s heavier than she looks! Finally, she’s situated on his lap. Her hair smells of .wildflowers. “Is this better now? My name is Adam, can you tell me yours?” He continually scans the park, but there’s still no one in sight to call for help.

She pulls the right side of his suit jacket away and lays her head over his heart as if to listen to its rapid beating. She’s warm, this feels nice. She sniffles, but nods affirmatively and with half-closed eyes says, “Amanda.” She fumbles in her coat pocket for a wad of tissue, and something else. Wiping her eyes, she moves her mouth close to his ear. It tickles when, with bubblegum-laden breath, she whispers, “This is good, because I’m too short to reach you from the ground.” What?

With that declaration, she sits up. Using both hands, she plunges a sharp six-inch grill-skewer through his shirt, and deep into his heart. “Thank you for being my present. I feel much better now.” He freezes in shock. What’s happening? This isn’t right! Amanda pats  the handle, before she pulls his jacket back over it, then slides off his lap.

Singing, “Happy Birthday to me,” she skips away. She circles around a small copse of trees, and stops next to a trashcan. Amanda discards her tissues and a cut onion, before approaching a swing set on the opposite side of the park from Adam. A teenage boy is texting as he sits on one of the swings.

She scowls for a split second, and fingers another skewer in her pocket, and then shrugs. Brightly, she calls, “Hello, it’s my birthday today. Would you please push me on the swing for a little bit?” Gravel crunches as he stands up and steps away. Smiling, she arranges her skirts to get on, while the boy holds it for her

The scent of wildflowers and bubblegum wafts up as the boy begins to push her. “You’re pretty small. How old are you?”

“Hey, still growing here! I am ten years old today, and my party is tonight.” After two or three minutes, Amanda stops the swing and jumps off. “Thank you. Have a nice day.” Once again, she begins to sing, “Happy Birthday to me,” and skips away towards home. I wonder what other presents I’m getting.

Adam’s immobilized with fear. The coppery taste of blood in his throat prevents him from breathing, and allows no words to escape. His eyes search frantically for help. He begins to slump over the bench as if he fell asleep. Eventually blood soaks through his clothes, and then works its way between the bench’s wooden seat slats before the first drop splats onto the newspaper. Seven Unsolved Killings, No Suspects, screams the headline.



Douglas V. Miller is a disabled Vietnam veteran, writer, poet, editor, and verbal storyteller. He has pieces in Continue the Voice, four times in Terror house Magazine, four times in Open Door, The Rational Creature, Writer’s Egg Magazine, three times in, Stripes, and the anthologies, Mythology of the Heart, and April-June Open Door Anthology. He is listed in Who’s Who of Emerging Writer’s 2021. He describes the majority of his work as slice-of-life writing about his own experiences; however, he also delves into other genres. He is a voracious reader. Doug currently resides in the US Midwest.


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